Reviews for Retribution
Ophite68 chapter 49 . 8/16/2019
Excellent world building! There is just so much scope because the canon POVs are just so narrow and unreliable.
Ophite68 chapter 21 . 8/15/2019
Hermione met her accuser's eye coolly, but the bow of her mouth curved in a slight smile. "The Van did not announce it when you went to war against me and mine. When you took from me those things that I valued." Her eyes warmed with mischief, "No one ever accused me of not learning my lessons thoroughly and well. You were able to do so much more damage that way" her head tilted in a self satisfied nod "so was I."
kathyjo chapter 6 . 4/8/2018
I'm loving this series..the wizarding world you porteay is scary! I think hermoine should have run fast and far away as she could!d and be like Harry and live a muggle life! I do wish she had been kept more n character cause she would not have put up with anyif this and for damn sure would not have strealized herself for any man!..I also miss Severus !
fhl1234 chapter 49 . 2/7/2017
While your stories have had many ups and downs along the way, it was very well-written. I really liked the epilogue, because I got to see how everyone's lives turned out. I was sad that Kevin died however. I wish you the best in your future novels.
mckertis chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
I have NO IDEA what this story is about.
emthereble chapter 48 . 12/4/2016
Brilliantly written, loved the whole series! !
cinthya chapter 49 . 10/26/2016
... you made me hate the wizard world...
skyeza chapter 49 . 3/3/2016
This has been a bloody wicked read. I absolutely loved it, definitely different from everything else I've read.
Eagle-Eyes chapter 49 . 1/20/2015
Very good series. I am quite glad that you have written original stories...

Keep writing in this world or the next as life allows..
hpfanscs chapter 49 . 9/24/2014
Very well written story with a plausible reason for a super Harry (Batman Harry). Thanks so much for your work in writing this outstanding piece.
hpfanscs chapter 22 . 9/24/2014
I have heard that a woman scorned is to be carefully avoided. Hermione takes that to a new level of meaning. Love the story.
littlechick2013 chapter 49 . 8/11/2014
this story was amazing. I'm not a big fan on drama stories, but this one blew me away. It took me four days to read the trilogy. It was well worth it. I liked how the story line , didn't give BS. It was realistic and sometimes scary enough to make you shudder. Again it was a great story, some moments made me laugh and some made me cry. Though the ending was just perfect. Hope you continue writing, you are very talented.
-M
darkrose0510 chapter 49 . 8/6/2014
Wow.

Can't think of anything else to say that does this series justice. Thanks for an awesome read!
Reedtanguera chapter 48 . 6/17/2013
Wow. That was monumentally depressing. And totally probable given JKR's existing canon framework. I really enjoyed the first piece in this trilogy. I also found myself rooting for Draco Malfoy of all people and wishing he had more screen time.
Guest chapter 49 . 5/2/2013
liked this :) thanks for writing
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