OMG THAT WAS AMAZING-i couldn't stop reading tthis has gotta be one of my favourite fanfictions AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IT WAS AWESOME

That was an amazing story. I loved the way you really got into Dick's head; it felt very genuine and painful. I also really loved your summary - very clever!

Thank you for such an awesome read!

Brilliant! Loved the story a great mind twister! Thanks!

for now? Ew, what's next?

WHAT!

Actually, you can't be hypnotized if your unwilling,and if you are hypnotized , but asked to do something you absolutely wouldn't do, you won't, common mis-conception, hypnosis isn't mind-control.

Wha-ha-ha-ha, can't be real, bi-polar's have sczophrenic symptoms, but don't create delusions. And bi-polars have manic mood swings, and re-tain the mentality of a certain age. Its a no-go. Whoot!

CANNOT BE TRUE!

The first few chapters are written a little disjointed and seemingly directionless but I really think this was good thing because it just makes the reader feel more in touch with the situation for Dick. He simply doesn't understand what's going on and up until the end, neither does the reader. I think that's a great method of writing and personally I believe it worked so well for this fic.

Anyway, glad to see it resolved.. partly :D

Great Job! I really don't know what else to say. Most excellent.

Too cool. You made the naturly unreal feeling of this story work FOR you rater than against you, and have left me wanting more... good work

i love it! i don't care what some other people might say, i personally really like it, so there d:

What a great story idea! I loved the conflict of Dick fighting for what he thinks is reality and the reality thrust on him. Beautiful!

Oh...that was soo sad. Very well done. I enjoyed it greatly. I can't believe Clayface knows. That ain't good. Is there any more?

keep writing!