LOL it's reaaaly good :) I loooove it...

This was fricking fantastic! Love it. You should make more!

Fab. I loved it :-) you have made y night.

loved it! great chemistry! :)

That was very hot! I need a cold shower now. I might have to read it again afterwards. :)

Oh my! This was incredible! Now I feel like rereading the series for the fifth time :D

TY for awesome oneshot

That should have happened. Honestly, it took forever for them to do anything. Love it!

~Xela

Do tell moew :)

I felt cheated then this part was skipped in the book. No more worries on that part. *lights cigarette* :D

Haaaaaawt! I do love the derty talk from Bones!

I enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing.

Damn, as I said on twitter this has kind of inspired me to write my own. Because there aren't many NH FF's out there, there are so many plots/scenarios and what if's to be explored. I started reading somebody elses FF who had an amazing idea (I don't want to mention names) but I think they did a poor job of the story and they haven't updated in a few months. I'm wondering whether to write my own version of what I would want to happen or if it would be frowned upon.

Anyways back to yours... I couldn't believe it in the books when nothing happened between them after the run. I thought it would have been a perfect opportunity since she was all wet and they'd been doing the dirty talk. So I'm glad you wrote this.

There was only one thing that kind of made me pause in my reading and it was this line

"I felt a fire building in stomach, threatening to take over"

It's hardly noticable, but I would perhaps add the word 'my' before stomach so it reads

"I felt a fire building in my stomach..."

Thank you for sharing this delightful little treasure with us. I look forward to reading more :)

schafer

This was cute and fun. I don't think he would let her stop running tho, he would have made her finish that first. But I liked it. Too bad it took longer in the book.

WOW! You certainly know how to make a girl blush! I hope you have many more smutty parties!

Great "What If"! I love it!

Bloody Hell! (you know, it's nice to be able to say that and have it not be out of place)

You say snatch. This makes me ridiculously happy. And you say twat. Have I told you how much I fucking love you?

*shudders* fuck that running shit. No thank you. I'd let Bones beat the tar out of me before I let him make me run. LOL

I love how easily he gave in... it's like he knew what would happen when they got back. He would be cocky(not pun intended) enough to think that too.

FUCK YES CAT! I lover her for turning the tables and trying to be the sex goddess. I'd flaunt whatever I've got in front of him too.

"but to Bones' supernatural ears, it was the same as screaming it from the rooftops" love this so fucking much.

"He pulled out and I thought my world would end" *thud*

"I thought it was the best shag of your life that you'd be recovering from." cocky motherfucker. Love him.

OMFG. I love this hard. Once again you prove your countessness. Again you've left me wanting more.

Love you hard special lady!