Hi! I really love your stories! They’re really well-written and I envy how well you blend narration with the dialogue (it’s a weak point of mine). Also! Have you considered making a sequel about all their kids? I’d definitely read it

Loved the story, wasn't too keen on a fifteen and pregnant check, or the triplets and Erik. Oh, and you tend to always use 'to' instead of 'too'. Ben and Kevin forever!

awesome

Why do all your stories end at the best part we were still in the climax that makes you a mean stingy writer

P.S. IT WAS GREAT

Is it wrong to say kill him

Dispatch he means kill right?

Your a real perve you know

Why did they have Gwens kid any way?

OMFliPping g that was so hot

i love your stories its like a drug i cant quit plz give me more whats the name of your other kevin x ben story plz call me lando when u reply if u do i hope u do im your biggest fan no joke

are u finished or are u making new chapters soon your my favorite author by the way

"Karma." [sounding like Trudy from 'Avatar'] Ain't that a bitch?

Is Check related to Cash, by any chance? And Jaymes just scored himself some serious points for standing up to that ass. Check should be lucky Jaymes doesn't have Anodyte powers like Gwen, otherwise Check would be in seriously deep shit.

Karma will always and forever be a bitch.

OMG that was a shocking super cool chapter and I normally don't like the sex scenes between brothers like that but this one right here. I loved it. It was a super hot chapter and really great sex scene. I'm really happy for Erick, as well as for the others. Great Story! :)