We use quotation marks when someone is talking, not dashes. The English is good enough. Fairly decent.

It has been 9 years and I don't know if you are in the fandom but if you are interested in continuing this that would be great, I like it so far :)

I can't wait to see what happens next! Ivan i hope will be sort of nicer to Mattie? Also maybe Mattie will get a less hot, a perfect bath

pweasssseeeecontinue!

So, I just wanted to say I quite like your story. :) It is very unique. Also, Your chapters are nice and lenghty wich I also like. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Don't leave it there, please please update!

This is interesting. I don't like how they talk

-like

-this

because it gets a little distracting, but otherwise, good job.

I miss Kumajiro...Russia should stop being so mean. I hope you find your muse for this story and start writing again.

Omg poor Mattie! D: Russia how could you do such "things" to our Canada! And where is Kumajiro? You better be feeding him! D

Man I love this! w So will wait for update~!

Oh yeah we're the peace keeping nation to. Why doesn't anyone ever mention that in this story?

ya know I think who ever wrote Hetaila forgot that Canada is a first Nation country. Did you know our black ops are the best in the world? or something like that. and personally I think we could kick Russia's ass. I wish someone would do a story with Canada as a stronger character. I could just see the US insult Canada and Matthew suddenly jumping up and putting Alfred in a headlock and shouting at him "WHO BURNT THE WHITE HOUSE DOWN! WHO? WHO? THAT'S RIGHT ME! I BURNT YOU MOTHER F*****G WHITE HOUSE DOWN YOU STUPID PRICK!" in fact I think I'm gonna go write that now. but otherwise great story, that up there is just my Canadian pride hurt from Matthews weak character. YAY! Russia 3 Canada!

I like the storyline so far The world can always use more Russia/Canada, eh?

Your English isn't too bad. Mostly your problem seems to be with tenses (past-tense vs. present-tense). Would you mind too much if I fixed that? Little things like that tend to bother me ;

D i would say poor Matt but i luv it when Ivan rapes him vut a awesomesausage story!

oh my goshhh

-is your biggest fan-

I really llike suspense

and I cant help but wonder when poor Canada

will get his bear back, and where he is, for that matter!

Russia pretty much got away with fooling the other countries

its..

its just amazing

it flows so perfectly

you fixed your problem as well!

good job, update soon, yes :3

very cool chapter you came up with a good lie for Russia on why Matthew isn't in the conference