Oh Damn. Where's the next button?!

Apparently, I got the year wrong. 4 years it is. I saw 2010 lol! That was the year it was published tho, Yeah I got that one wrong.

Goddamn it you two! You're both overthinking ya know? Hahahaha lol. That was effing cute, and so much that I could die squealing in here..! That looks like love at first sight, dont you think? Well only for me I guess. Those two are really for each other if you ask me. I just love them together, they're so cute! And adorable! And this fanfic just made my love of them being together grow even more.

The descriptions, the explanations of emotions and feelings in this fic, really made me feel what they felt right there. I was always like that, my imaginations haven't failed me so far. They would always show a little screen in my mind to look at and see the fic like a show in a TV. I could see Cloud's eager eyes when Seph started introducing him to weapons and his smile, that I always imagine had a little shy edge to it. I could see Seph's cute tilting of head everytime he's curious and his bright green eyes that would regard Cloud with gentleness and softness as to not further make Cloud scared or upset in some way, as he apparently thought! He's worried and I like it, especially when he saw Cloud smile.

I definitely hoped you could continie this. But it seems I'm a little too late. Its been what? 8 years since this is last updated. But this is so good!

This is pretty good!

awesome story! the mentorship program is really interesting!
wonder how reno will do with genesis?
or genesis with reno, ha!
the meeting between cloud and sephiroth was beautifully written, i absolutely adored it,it was GREAT.
and i love the bits of friendshipness with zack.

I'm so glad I found this story! I've never come across a story such as this, where you have our top SOLDIERS training cadets :). Extremely well written and I hope you update real soon!

Found this one while spelunking in the archives very nice. Hope you will continue with it someday.

oh please make more i wanna see how the second talk with Reno and Genesis will go!

Good.

Very interesting! I loved the first lesson! I can't wait for more~!

I have now read the sixth chapter. You are a good writer. I also noted two zeros somewhere in the text, around the part with Reno and Cloud. I quite like this story, and hope to read more of it. Cloud is good for giving advice, isn't he?

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I am going to bed before I read the sixth chapter. I'll do it tomorrow, but before I ready myself for bed, I wanted to say that Cloud and Sephiroth are treasures. As I read the fifth chapter, I thought, "Oh, they are precious." My heart melted. I could actually feel my expression soften. You are brilliant. I will sleep tonight with a warm feeling and a soft heart.

The irony for poor Gen, because that's probably how he acted when he was a cadet. Anyways, I'm finding this quite enjoyable, so happy writing and many kudos.

Awesome! I really love this story and interactions between Cloud and Sephiroth are kinda beautiful. :) Will there be more? Will Cloud still end up with the same kinda sword as in canon? I really can't wait to see more. Will you update again? Please?

Wow, this was such a fun read, with nice attention placed on the thoughts of each of the major characters. I also really enjoyed the phrase "hunger maddened mass". I know this was updated a long while ago, but I sincerely hope you update sometime.