Loved it! I want more! So please, please, please, update quickly.

coolupdate soon it getting intresting

I love the entire story! You MUST update! LOVE IT!

Why didn't skipper want private on the team? I must know! or I will explode, that happens sometimes.

I think rico is sad that it has to be pg lol!

lol! you fit rico perfectly!

The story is great! Please update soon! Loved Skipper's last line to Rico "Just keep it PG." Rico "AWW."

I am writing a story for penguins and if you get the time, could you read it! Name: New Animals at the Central Park Zoo

keep it up! this looks interesting

hmm... rico's story... i wonder what it'll be like?

The characters are all in character, and you made me LOL with your Oc's, I cant wait to see what Rico is up too. The quality of the dialouge is great, and your desciptions of the new penguins put a good image in my mind. Overall, good job. I can;t wait to see what's going on in Rico's mind...I think...:)

this looks interesting!

lol! what mort is so funny! I love this story!

This is a very interesting beginning. The dialouge is in character. I suggest adding more details of where they are, as in the five sneses. You could describe they are at a small, wooden table, or mention that the walls were gray and damp or cold, things like that. Also, descibing what a character looks like is important, even if most of the people reading this know what they look like, it adds a little more depth and makes the reader "see" whats going on. I hope this helps, and always keep writing! It's good for you!