Very good.

Aw - lovely, warms the cockles.

that was a terrific ending! i am fine with the mild T, and i thought you pulled it off beautifully. their intimacy and love came across just right as they tentatively revealed their emotions. and i thought the whole thing with her wearing his stuff and him getting into bed fully clothed and her getting him to undress was really cute.

First of all thanks for review for my post Loyalty ep. story. Congratulations on graduating (you walked exactly one year to the date I walked...06/13/2009)! I know you're still psyched.

Shoot I wanted to review but couldn't (a ton of studying for online grad classes)! I read it and I loved it!

Can't wait to read what have planned next!

I enjoyed this story. I think it ended well.

that was great ending. i really enjoyed it :D thank you and i look forward to reading more of your stories in the future

congratulations, graduate! you deserve to be very proud. and now you can reward us with more writing, so we win too. i really liked this chapter. alex is right about how much better off they would have been if they had allowed themselves to comfort each other. and i am pleased that bobby has taken that cue. they just need to let things move along naturally. i'm eager for your next update!

Aw! That was so sweet, Snyder! I have a silly little grin from reading it!

First of all may I say many congratulations on graduating with honors.

I really am enjoying this story. And totaly look forward to the next chapter, I am really pleased you decided to continue. And the thought of more stories...YEAH.

yay! thank you for updating, loved it! congrats on finishing collage :D

end it here? oh no, no no... please *puppy eyes and wagging tail* please more? *bats eyelashes*. there has to be a little bit more, with sugar on top. and sprinkles, chocolate sprinkles (those are the best).

This was another great chapter. I can see how you feel you could be done. But...you know me, I'd love to read more. Totally up to you.

Nice job!

That was such a strong well written chapter I loved it, you had depth and yet so much understanding between them loved it.

I think if you have more it would be of similar high standard but if you leave it as it is that would be fine too. Where you have ended this chapter could either be a natural pause; or just an intake of breath.

This is a lovely, sweet story, after an amazing episode, one of my all time favourites. I love your writing, and I would definitely love to read more chapters.

that was really sweet. i thought it was cute that he was worried about whether his apartment was clean enough! and then they were in sync, and everything was so natural. more? i could go for more if something comes to mind - i'm always up for more! but if you can't think of anything that feels right, this works as an ending too ... an ending that signals a fresh beginning.