Crap! Arrow right through the heart. This ending inspired me to pick up the pen and...

I will be back.

WOW!
I Loved this Chapter, so sweet . . .
*Thousand Years starts playing*
:-D

That was so sad!

This almost made me cry happily . . .
So much gooey-ness
:-D

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OMG ! ! !

Awe . . .
This is so sweet!
I Love your story!

I know I'm a little late to the party since this story is like five years old now but DAMN that was good! I loved it from start to finish, though it truly hurt my heart by the end. I'll be honest though... I kind of am super interested in Princess. She seems very dimensional, just from the few lines about her. Oh well, guess we'll never know more.

Thank you for writing this awesomeness!

As soon as chapter 9 came up I began tearing up because I had seen "What Goes Around".

Seriously, I was CRYING to death! How sad!

Now, enough with the tissues.

I am impressed with your writing and the soul that comes from within. I could "feel" what Dolly, Julien, and Rico were feeling, and I believe you portrayed Julien very well.

Well done!

(P.S., I always thought of this centering around the Twilight Saga...SORRY!)

Oh my god this was so sad! :( Please, please, pppllleeeaaasseee make a new chappie where Dolly is brought back! She can't die!

*speaking through tears*

I loved this story soo much. It was *SOB* AWESOME.

WHy? WHY?WHY? *CRIES OBNOXIOUSLY* Dolly deserved LOve! i dol;t care3 even fi she ended up wiht Julien now!

I still think it was great. Sad enedings are ssometimes better than happy ones...but *CIRES CIRES CRIES*

Soemtimes stroies wiht sad endings on here can be given alternate ending for people like me (who is now going to be fracking depressed all day) You don't HAVE to, I can always make up my own ending in my mind, but maybve you could latch on one two more Altenate ending chapters? One being Rico/Doll and the other Julien/Doll.

But, do it or not, this was a beautiful story, sad or otherwise. Thank you for sharing it.

Oh man, what a conclusion to a great story! You've really managed to incorporate so many emotions in this story as it's come along, all equally fitting and compelling. I was watching this play out in my head a I read and man I could picture Dolly's soul just shattering to pieces as she finds out her lifelong situation, and Julien watching the sunrise would make such a climatic ending that I wish they had used your story as a script and aired it instead of the What goes Around episode, maybe as a special. Lol on and on I mentally beggged her to find an escape route, to be free of a child who will only tire of her presence in the years to come, but the consequence of that I think would be, how hard would it be for her to know that if she had in fact gone to be with her true love, that they would eventually die, leaving her alone once again? You've earned every favorite that each reader including myself has selected. I hope you will continue more POM stories and am very proud of how you were able bring this story to our attention!

I'm crying already! So Good!

While I was depressed at the ending, that only shows how much I liked this story to have wanted a happy one. The plot holes don't take away from the story, so I wouldn' be so bothered about it. If anything, I think they're good to have so the reader form their own oppinions and musings because some things just can't be explained.

I liked this story alot and I hope the sequel will be just as good, or better. With a happy ending!

Omigosh! Poor dolly. I hope there is a way she can go back with Rico after she gets given to someone else. She should chose Rico!

Okay... I honestly didn't think you would tie this into that episode. Um.. I'm still cheering on for Rico but I dunno if it's even going that way anymore. I am impatiently waiting for your next update.