Reviews for Breaking the Cycle |
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Guest chapter 5 . 8/10/2014 Hey im really gutted that you haven't updated this plot in a long time Please come back to this story! Email me: |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 5 . 6/22/2014 OH MY GOD THIS STORY IS GETTING MORE MORE MORE AWESOME PLEASE UPDATE IAM EXCITED AS MONKEY :) |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 4 . 6/22/2014 please update i love this story please let there be 100 chapters coming :) |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 3 . 6/22/2014 please iam begging you please update :) |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 2 . 6/22/2014 wow senju and uchiha yep this story got interesting please update soon :) |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014 this STORY IS AWESOME AND I LOVE THE NARUTO AND HINATA PAIRS AND ITACHI AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
SonOfObito chapter 5 . 5/20/2013 Uh i hope u continue this story. Its one of the only good next gen fanfics |
fatcatfaizal chapter 5 . 8/31/2012 helo there. man what a story. honestly i really like your writing style and u have become one of my favourite writer in this fanfic. all i can said is i cant wait for the next chapter so sorry for being selfish but please update soon together with the jinchuuriki assemble story. one question though are this story going to be more on drama rather than action? keep Writing and i'll be keep Reading :) |
Classified chapter 5 . 1/25/2011 It was MY comment that got you to update wasint it? Heh I thought so! So a uchia (well really a uzamaki) and a senju eh? Well this story is getting better and better! Well hopefully you can update faster now! Cya soon! |
Trueblade Hinata chapter 5 . 1/25/2011 Great chapter! Naruto's twins fit well in their respectful the part with Tsunade and her spare hidden bottle of sake was funny. I am not surprised that Kyoko is Hashirama's great-great granddaugther.I do hope that Itachi and her still get along. This is great so up the good work! |
Hektols chapter 5 . 1/25/2011 Very good explanation for the Senju's disappearance, being diluted among the other Konoha clans for the alliances explains why there are no more Senjus in Konoha and why the Uchiha were looked so bad, the rest of the village inherited the animosity. |
Hektols chapter 4 . 1/25/2011 Good one. |
Hektols chapter 3 . 1/25/2011 Very good one. I think that at least the jonins should have been told about the criminals, the defense of the village is part of their job. |
Hektols chapter 2 . 1/25/2011 The family part was very sweet. Why the Inuzuka girl is matched with Itachi? He is supposed to be a supergenious. If Kyoko is a Senju why Tsunade is not taking care of her? |
Hektols chapter 1 . 1/25/2011 Very good one but there are things that seems out of place like Hizashi getting the Hyuuga name instead of his father's. Hanabi's heir should be her own child not her older sister's. But the most shocking part is Naruto naming his son as one of the worst criminals in Konoha's official history, including the family name. If he loved his son he would have given him another name and not one that would guarantee Itachi a similar treatment that Naruto had when he was a child. |