To quote Steve Martin, in My Blue Heaven, "Nice,...very nice."

Very nice piece! Just the right amount of feeling and connectedness. I love that he was massaging her shoulders - would love to see it on the show! As usual, Lanie is right on with her assessment!

Nice work! continue it!

Aw...I love this. Wish you'd consider writing more.

I really liked this one. Feels like them, I could see this scene in an episode.

Oh I loved it. You have great writing skills. I loved Lanie at the end: "Girl, you don't even know how lucky you are." Ah, too true.