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   Uchiha Bara chapter 2 . 3/1/2012 poor kamui |
| Uchiha Bara chapter 1 . 3/1/2012 :) |
| TheUn-POP-ableBubble chapter 2 . 9/11/2011 You captured their relationship beautifully in these two short fics. I'll be re-reading these many, many times. ) Beautiful work! ~Bubbles |
| Jaylea Nyx Felesian chapter 2 . 5/6/2011 Wow... just wow. I always wanted to read Kamui's thoughts on this part and while reading/watching the manga/anime I thought about it for a while but this...this just put what I knew into the perfect words. Your words really reach out to the heart and make you feel Kamui's pain at being half of what he should be and Fuma's relentless personality makes it even more enjoyable! I really hope you complete this! I'd love to see the joy of Sabaru waking up! |
| ayam3112 chapter 2 . 3/27/2011 i love this sooooo much...i wish there was more T.T...i was watching the new tsubasa ova that was dubbed by funimation today and looked up your story and wanted to cry cuz they hadnt dubbed all the seasons |
| snap-me chapter 2 . 12/5/2010 god, this is just damn good! love it very much! but, are this just two chapter? no more? i hope you dont mind to add more of this pair, hehe |
| Fields of paper chapter 2 . 8/7/2010 aw, Kamui-sama, you truly are cute. I love the way you worded it. So beautiful. You are a very great writer. The two just having five more minutes... so adoreable. haha, Kamui-sempai, you are a very lazy vampire. Muahahahaha! |
| Fields of paper chapter 1 . 8/1/2010 I loved this story, I liked how you said 'Fuuma didn't understand'. K/F Forever! I actually wrote a story that you might like. It's called 'Night's Love'. Here- u/2459990/Fields_of_paper |
| laustic chapter 2 . 6/18/2010 Aww, poor Kamui. I love seeing Kamui's feelings of the time Subaru was sleeping beneath the water. |
| chocovic-chu chapter 1 . 5/9/2010 oww, that's what twins mean to be.. lovely! but vic prefers considering the twins just as brotherly's love.. |
| kinosternon chapter 1 . 5/9/2010 I like the way you handled Subaru and Kamui in this! It's a good midway point between sibling and romantic love (since I can't decide which I like better with these two XP). I am interested in when the "vampire" bit comes in, though it's nice that it just sort of happens without being addressed, like it doesn't make a difference... I would definitely be interested in seeing you continue this. :D |
| laustic chapter 1 . 5/4/2010 This was excellant! I hope you will add more chapters to this fic. |
