Riza doubles as Roy's assistant and bodyguard. He goes on a lot ofmissions, so she get's plenty of action.

Having read all 4 parts-LOVE! The beautiful thing about these is that you've captured the essence of them, it feels like I'm really reading Roy and Riza. Well done!

Very soap-operaish :) (My mind tries to imagine what kind of reaction to this has poor Fuery standing in line just next to Riza)

Another good chapter, let's hope it foreshadows the future.

You discribed faithfully the 'acknowledging' aspect of their relationship here. Riza knows she means a lot to him and Roy knows she knows as well but they choose not to act upon it. Well written, liked it a great deal.

I certainly enjoyed each of these wonderful ficlets. Each of them was interesting and put a very nice fresh and elegant spin on their relationship which I enjoyed heartily!

I especially loved the fact that Riza didn't slap him once, not twice, but three times. Gotta love that spunk of hers. :D

Great job on these little gems. I hope you write more Royai! _

-Ze

Wow, I love this little story you've got going on here. With such few words, you're able to utilize the characters to their full potential and craft a brilliant piece. Well done.

Sora(:

Very nice! I'm really enjoying these. Keep up the great work.

I agree with Grey's - really unique approach. well done!

I like it! I'll be watching for the rest of it! The direction you're taking with this is unique, and I want to see more of it! Still, with next Wednesday being the Japanese release date for the next chapter, we may have to wait a while, mightn't we?

I really enjoyed this, can't wait for more

Simple and sweet... I like it )