well this is quite good

I love your General Grievous x Shaak Ti stories, especially this one! Your stories gave me confidence to write my own Grievous x Shaak Ti story, and so far it's going on really smoothly. So thanks for that xD

This is SO good! Very recently I came acros this corner of SW fandom and I'm completely taken with this would-be-couple. You're doing an amazing work! Keep it up. (:

in clone wars her eyes are kinda purple look closely!

My fav so far

Great

Sooooo perfect!

Very Exciting!

Sooooo good!

I loved it

Secura wasn't killed on hypori

You are an incredible writer. The way you convey emotion and your sense of imagery is phenomenal. I really like Shaak Ti, so it is nice to see her being well-written. Always keep writing; a talent like yours deserves to be recognized.

Pfft! Hahahahaha! This part was funny when Shaak Ti said:
"I'd like to know what his touch feels like…no!"
Pfft! Hilarious!

Favorite chapter so far. Maybe one for the Sith Code and then the original Jedi Code.

Ooooh. Certainly maddening how depressing some of this is. I really admire how you touch on the softer sides of the general's personality, that side that we can't be certain is really there, but just seems to fall into his character so neatly that it belongs.