Awww molly and Daniel

WORK!

I loved it.

This was great! I loved it...god job. (:

ohhh loved this hope u continue with more chapters (:

Great start, whrite soon!

This is fantastic! I always wondered how Daniel managed to magically "bump in to" Betty like that, because as Daniel said, London is a HUGE city and he would have had to know she was going to be there before hand to orchestrate meeting her like that - and we all know he did! lol!

I love protective big sister!Hilda. She gave Daniel the kick in the butt he needed and then she helped him out. Smart woman. And now whenever I watch that final scene, I'll be thinking that this is what happened the moment before Daniel meets Betty in Trafalgar Square.

Also loved your play of words on the word "Lost": Daniel is literally lost in London, but he's also figuratively lost without Betty. Very nicely done.

Thanks for dreaming this up and sharing it with all of us. :).

love this story update soon

loved this! as in!

Loved Daniel in this. You write beautifully :) Now want to know what ran through Daniel's mind once he finally sees Betty in the square.

Cute. Absolutely, tooth-achingly fluffy, cute. And obviously, you never cross Hilda. Who seemed best in character by the way. Do you think maybe you were channeling someone? ;)