i love this i love this thank

Does that mean she accepted? YOU ENDED THE STORY WITH A CLIFF HANGER! DID SHE ACCEPT OR NOT? D'X

I love this fic! But did she agree to date him?

Oooooh. I loved the characterization in here.

Well, it's a start, right? I love your story. It's downright America. It's so in character. hahahaha! Hope you could write more awesome stories. :D

"Alfred was busy guiding the rabbit through the loop..." THAT KILLED ME. lol

Can you make a small epilogue about Natalia's answer? This story is the best AmeBel fic by far
I love it sooo much! XD

It;s a 50 on the back of his jacket not a 56

IT'S ALFRED F. JONES NOT ALFRED E. JONES! RAWR! *Flips Table*

I re-read this fic again while listening to John Fogerty's 'Centerfield'. _

I'm confused wasthat a yes or a no?

Hell yes I caught the weird al reference! Though I think it was because coincidently I was listening to that particular song xD

i have to say... this is probably one of the most well written fics i've read in quite a while. seriously.

i loved the fact that you kept belarus in character the whole time and how you linked in some background history. also the glossaries on baseball were really helpful (i don't really know anything...heh).

also: russia made me laugh. a lot. specially the snowman part.

so yeah, in short; awesome job on this fic!

Wow, that was so cool! And, that was an awesome ending. I was really beginning to wonder if Alfred was going to pull of the miraculous or not. I'm glad that he did. America is just so easy going, so the ending was perfect-I can see things ending just like that with his temperament.

In all fairness to Alfred, I would probably have fallen for a few of his attempts before he had to use the "Kiku Maneuver," of which I also approve-that was a great coined term. I totally loved the 'putting the girl's name on the bicep' trick. My favorite is still the kiss cam.

I just love this story! Because its so Epic!

AmeBela pairing forever!