love it :3

keep on going keep on going keeeeeeep on going

keep on going

Awwwww... ADORBS

(I think I'm gonna keep this name lol) Awesome oneshot :D I thought it was super fluffy! And I LOVE ASTRO/CORA FLUFF/CONNECTION/BOND/EVERYTHING XD You tinkled my fancy

This is a very lovely story you have here. The only problems are the back story and the details. Those who like the stories here have already seen the movie, so the back story was a bit excessive. Remember to respect the intelligence of your audience. To fill up the gap, a little more sensory detail would have been nice. This was good, don't get me wrong. But I would like to have seen a little more of what you are capable of as a writer.
You say you may continue it. Please do, General. I am here should you need assistance and I wish you many magical words along the way.
-Magician Irono

Awwww that's so sweet! :D

Its extreemly sweet. I almost cried with Cora :(

(0o0) awwwwww Failing-san(not shure if that sounds right,maby you'd perfer General-san?) this is amazing i love it!(0o0)

First sentence grabbed me. I love what you say about Astro's eyes, 'cause I thought the same thing.

that was amazing so sweet it made me cry,not just cora id like to read more

that was amazing so sweet it made me cry,not just cora id like to read more

Cute as a carebear :D

Totally continue! Please! I'll review every chapter!

Aww, that's really sweet. And I know exactly what you mean about the end of the movie, I was watching it and was all like 'this movie's great' then the ending came up and TOTALLY ruined the moment! I was sooo pissed off! And anyway, great story!