This was cute!
-Sammi

oh, i just love noah, such a nice fic

LOL...LOVED IT!

Amazing ! I love your story.

"That's not what I asked," he tells her. Her eyes meet his and she shrugs helplessly. "And for the record? I'm not a boy." Her brow furrows. "I don't treat women like other guys my age do."

Noah really does treat some women good. He stepped up to be a father for Quinn's baby. He tried to woo Lauren even though she was a little overweight. Puck treated Rachel good. He chose her over football.

"He doesn't really show her off in front of Schue. Not really. She's got a point about that tension and shit, and he kind of wants to win Regionals this year, too.

But he does kiss her once (twice...maybe three times) when Schue is looking and Rachel doesn't realize he's there.

And maybe he winks at Schue over Rachel's shoulder. Just once."

That was so Puck. It's like he's taunting, "Ha. Ha. I got the girl, but you didn't."

Fantastic story. I was going all kinds of crazy (in a good way) over this love triangle. I just loved Puck in this too. It was odd that Will told her she was a perfect mix of Terri and Emma. I had never thought of it that way, but I can definitely see it. And it DID help make more sense of his feelings. I'm really glad Puck fought for her and that you let the triangle develop within the story, rather than just starting it with them immediately/openingly caring for each other. What I mean is, Puck and Rachel didn't realize they cared for the other that way in the beginning of the story...and I liked that we got to see their feelings develop.

I can't tell if any of that made sense. I'm kind of tired. Lol.

It was really no contest. Shue...he had no chance.

But this story was really...amazing. I wish I could say more, but I can't. I think the characters were all accurately portrayed, the storyline was great, and your writing style is flawless, in my opinion.

Loved it.

Did I ever tell you how much I love your stories? lolzz.

Poor Mr. Schue...NOT! Love the story.

I think I will forever love Noah Puckerman. :) The last part about parading Rach secretly in front of Schue is so Puck. Great job. It's nice to read something like this. Love your work.

Wonderful story! I'll admit I put myself off of reading it for a long time because Will/Rachel just doesn't sit well with me AT ALL, but I finally gave in in the hopes that it would all work out in the end.

And I'm glad I did, because I enjoyed it immensely (:. Great job, as always, it's phenomenal.

Haha, this made me laugh a lot. Good 'ol Puck.

I really feel like Ryan Murphy needs to read this and then somehow make it fit into the show. This was convincing that I could see it play out in my head. You have just started me on Rill fanfics and increased my love of PuckleBerry. I mean Rill is a total crack pairing but hey you made it work for the story.

crackfic or not... love! you made it work... and i do mean WORK. :) Amazingness, as always. Thank you!

~celia~

"Swimfan". Is this a reference to the movie? (I usually get most pop culture references, but I had to look this up. I assume it is. I think it says something about the detail of your writing that I feel like I'm missing something if I don't get all of the references).

I think that sums up your writing pretty well actually: everything is essential and it makes me pay attention. Your writing stays with me, for a lot of different reasons, and almost always forces me to think about something I've been dealing with.

It transcends being "about" or "connected with" something else. The show basically ceases to exist.

Great, great work.

This story is amazing. I was a little weary in reading it at first with the whole Will/Rachel parts. But I liked how it all turned PuckleBerry in the end.

Well written and a great read.