can u make one up for me

really enjoyed your ending

LOVE it!

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Cute.

you did awesome and you included rosaline too i wonder if you could make another one with juliet finding out she is pregnat.

Love the Shakesperian script. :) amazing writing

i liked it. :)

I liked this. I enjoyed the idea that Juliet did go to a convent, and that she met Rosaline there. I also really liked your characterization of Rosaline, she's very much like I imagined her.

Excellent job overall.

Stunning, purely stunning. To be completely honest, better then most of the Shakespere Ive read in my life. I knew you were good, but this is amazing. You really do have an outstanding talent, especially for someone who is practically self-taught. It was truthful, creative, beatiful, and passionate. Cant wait to read some more.

I enjoyed it. The writing style was fabulously realistic. Something seemed a little false to me though that may just be my acquaintance with the true ending. All in all, very good :)

Well done!

I think you stayed true to Juliet's character.

The only mistake I think you made was when Rosaline introduced herself to Juliet. Remember, Rosaline is Capulet's niece which means that she is Juliet's cousin, so they would already know each other.