Reviews for Our Love |
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OfSunsetsandCarcrashes chapter 1 . 12/9/2010 :) Pretty good short poem. Kind of sad, but really good. |
elie gran-gran chapter 1 . 11/12/2010 excuse my cruelness, but my first impression was 'a pretty normal poem' Yeah I can feel the sadness and despair, but I didn't felt the rhyme Maybe you should try using metaphors? I'm not sure myself, but overall, I still think its a good poem, not many could write like this b |
Miz-KTakase chapter 1 . 5/18/2010 Beautiful. What a beautiful poem. |