poor Grovyle...

I have been scouring for decent PMD stories, and right now, I absolutely love this one-shot, despite it's briefness. It perfectly explains Grovyle kicking himself for not realizing anything sooner. And of course later, when he accepts that she has a new partner who cares about her. It's very impressive. You obviously put forth an effort in delving into Grovyle's thoughts.

Great job! ;)

This is really good! The game sets up for a lot of emotional and backstory details that it doesn't explore so I love reading things like this and you've done a great job of getting into Grovyle's head while also revealing a lot about Ichigo's character.

Love it. Just, love it.

This was really good. I think you did a great job comparing Ichigo to her human form. Keep it up!