Reviews for Morning Breath |
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sharlene chapter 2 . 5/1/2014 I review this story that daphne have a baby and fred is the father |
Emma Burke chapter 2 . 2/27/2014 Scooby doo Morining Breath is stinky. shagy rogers. is funny. |
TrickyTrickster chapter 2 . 9/28/2010 Stan the most brillaint story you have wrote check out russian roulette :D Ali XD (Cant wait for more stories) |
mxR chapter 2 . 8/27/2010 Good,Story:) but, im a little confussed is tha boy Thomass the one Fred mett, daphne and freds,kid? How,wass he olld &Little at the same time? Sorry, im confused But,Really Wassa cute story goodjob:D. |
Queen of Spiritual chapter 2 . 5/20/2010 Cute chapter, LOV. When you look at my stories with Fred, I named his son Andrew, who has never been in the stories because of his murder. Hope you update chapter 3 soon! |
draco122 chapter 2 . 5/19/2010 ok got to be honest the whole ghost boy thing was kind of creepy. But as usual nicely done. Expect this time i think i saw it coming. Anyway nice job and yeah that is all i got. Draco122 |
Night Dame chapter 2 . 5/19/2010 Ah! how cute loved the story! |
PiperSpoon13 chapter 2 . 5/19/2010 smiles, all so complications was why the little boy was there. Happy story with a happy ending |
mollyywobbles chapter 2 . 5/19/2010 That was so sweet! xx |
mollyywobbles chapter 1 . 5/19/2010 AAwwww I love this! Its really good and FYI My last name is Thomas, so I was a bit chuffed bout that! Keep going! xx |
Jazzola chapter 1 . 5/19/2010 Hm... This is a great start, very intriguing! I would like to see more, despite feeling a little ill myself at the "covered in blood" part... being a squeamish girl, I don't like that gruesome stuff. But this is awesome! Keep going! Jazzola :) |
Queen of Spiritual chapter 1 . 5/19/2010 Good start, LOV. I liked the conversation between Fred and the little boy with no name. LOL! |
PiperSpoon13 chapter 1 . 5/18/2010 So heartbreaking...poor Pumpkin No Name |