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The bombing of shinobi would actually work out pretty well deidara was a s-class shinobi that was basically just a bomber anyway it would work on most shinobi and really only the upper echleon ones would survive to be any real threat and even they wouldnt like nuclear

I hope this story isn't dead I was really enjoying to see more soon

I hope this isn't dead I was really enjoying it. Hope to see more soon

xxx Kudos xxx : )

Loving the story, the battles, and the character development throughout the story thusfar.

I LOVE THIS, so worth reading it again! thank you for updating, this is the kind of fanfic that wanders into your mind from time to time to remind you of an scene or the plot. Thank you again! Absolutely love the badassness of everyone, specially Hermione. I really like how you bring out their potential and strength and maturity (or lack thereof) in every situation because they are awesome people and without bashing either world or making it unbelievable. Also, love the integration of the two world; definitely the best crossover HPxNaruto I've read and one of the best fanfic.
Thank youu!

I'm not a fan of the boggart trope where the crossover character has one that turns into like 50 different things, but whatever. The thing that really bothers me here is the absolutely inane way you decided to habdle languages. Partway through the scene with Katsumata I just skipped the rest because sorting dialogue from prose without any indicators is a fucking nightmare. You could easily just use italics within quotations, or better yet just indicate in the text which they're speaking. I'm really hoping you stopped doing that at some point, 'cause I can see myself skipping a lot of scenes if not.

Hello.

I'm typing this on my 2ds. (I doubt you've ever gotten a review from a 2ds before.)

I've only read 2 chapters so far but your writing is very endearing and captures the style of Harry Potter! A very common idea is done uniquely and well. And I love your characterizations!

However, I would like to say a bit about Boruto.
It was my introduction to the Naruto series, so naturally I like it, and it's not all trash, but I agree it is not done well. Boruto could have been better; it could have been so much better. Yet I will stick with it, for character interaction & development, as well as mystery unveiling.

Have a wonderful- no, FANTABULOUS day! And again I really love your story!

- Draquazea

omgg this is amazing love it so much

Had to read the whole story over again, but worth it thanks for updating. I hope Naruto ends up fighting/connecting with his mom. Maybe she’ll teach him something like the chain technique. Oh man it would be great if Luna and Kushina met as well:) lol update soon.

This story is all kinds of YAAAAASSSS!

Still loving it so far! If you're having trouble with the formatting, having you considered posting on archive of our own? I hear its much easier to work with :) thank you for writing!

I had to comment that Harry's thoughts on the individual evolutions of rap between the barrier during such a epic scene made me laugh! So far this story is incredibly well written and had a very good plot. Only thing I'm not too fond of is that the headmaster seems to know so much. This would be fine if he mentioned the use of divination but his forewarnings kind of come out of nowhere.

You’re doing an awesome job! I love this story!