LoL!
Love the ending!

I love how you show Altair with that Grandmaster authority and Malik's childlike stubborness! Aww to be in love. I felt alot of suspense nearing the end! THank you!

oh my god. that was so worth skipping school. i skip school because i began reading this when i had to get up... i was like "Fuck it. This story is more important." and than i just kept reading and here i am on this chapter... im gonna continue reading, share this, and play modern warfare 3.

Wow, that was so great I read it all in one go when I totally should have been asleep. Great job - I love the interaction between those two and your characterization is spot on. Many hugs!

Loved the ending.

Can't wait to see what else you've got.

Looove.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

I loved! 3

Hearing of "Lezio" I feel like calling them Malt (melt) or Malty, but I adore this pairing! There can never be enough fanfics for them.

To my point, I loved this story- particularly that you kept them so in character, and it's in proper English! Yay!, I love their strained relationship, and the plot following AC1. Much love.

Reading through, I thought Chapter 8 could have been a sufficient ending, but I was excited to see another chapter- I wish there were a million more, and then my life would be complete.

In summation an excessive yet insufficient review to phrase the thoughts in my head and for your obvious talent, but I hope you'll keep writing, especially about Altaïr and Malik.

LOL! This Is Great! I Love This Story! XD Great Job! D

Ahh I loved this. Not just because of the smut (which we all enjoyed ;D ) but because of the depth it had and how you kept them as in character as a noncanon couple can be :)

"I noticed that a lot of people like to write Malik as "bottom" (one of my reviewers brought this up and made me question things) and I kind of feel like they do it because he's missing an arm or something." - Ch 8 A/N

hehe... i don't know about other people, but the reason I feel Malik is more of a bottom is because he seems like such a tsundere to me... a tsundere that's just asking to be dominated :D but yeah, that's my reason. And usually, when i get a pairing and have the characters in their role as dominate/submissive, i find it very hard to change my mind.

However, despite my inflexibility, that did not make the sex-scene during chapter 4 any less smocking hot. It was the most over-the-top detailed sex scene I've ever read. I swear i had to keep turning away, blushing, and to remind myself that I'm just READING a story, and not peeping in. XD

I loved the ending, left of with Malik getting his last words in. The fluff moments in the later chapters were also a welcome from all the angst.

Can't wait for more!

This is many kinds of awesome. I really enjoyed this. And I happen to agree with an earlier comment you made about Malik, I don't think he should be so labelled. I hope you write some more about these two soon :)

Oh, this story was fantastic. Your characterisations were beautiful, your skills at writing both the smut and the non smut were some of the best I have seen in a long time, and the masterful way that you blended the plot and the character development was just wonderful.

I loved it!

Thank you so very much for not writing Malik as some wimpy whiner who always bottoms. This fic has made my day beyond belief. :D

oh god that was just too cute.