It's a really different story. I really love it even though there are some spelling and grammatical mistakes in it.
I've read it a thousand times but never get tired of it :)

Wow! I was really amazed by your story :') it made me cry and laugh at the same time ... well all in all its awesome! And I think its a great thing if it becomes a movie. I'm sure that this one will gonna be successful :)

at last! Oh my this fic is so great! I really love their happy ending! XD good job! And I'll wait ur updates for 'notes'

almost cried, realy :( its so sad

god, this is so romantic. U make me almost cried. Maybe if this fic created as a movie, it will be successfull

huh? First time they meet, and they just kissed? They r really great.

wow im really really really curious. I'll go to the next chap

so... Cloud is angeal's son?

so... Cloud is angeal's son?

so, for this time cloud was misunderstanding his parents huh? And also, she is his 1st love too :D

ahahaha, zack is so funny! For several times, he is always made me smile XD and for fenrir, im really surprised. Not bcause its a wolf, but bcause it could talk n predict future.

dunno what to write, but this ch is so sweet n funny!

reno is really a bastard. But I feel sorry for him bcause many author set him as a bad guy. Including me hahaha

reno is really a bastard. But I feel sorry for him bcause many author set him as a bad guy. Including me hahaha

they r kissed? Whoa... Suddenly. And I m laughing when cloud is fighting with cissnei hahahaha