Reviews for Pater Noster
TinaF chapter 1 . 3/18/2017
Great story! Thank you for sharing.
DragonMistressOfRedemption888 chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
Killing off Bella is a serious criminal offense in the Twilight fandom.

Aro: Now we shall vote on this author's guilt, my brothers.

Caius: Guilty, destroy the author who dared to kill my Bella. *lets out a dry sob despite heavy efforts to stop it*

Marcus: I hate unnecessary violence, but I have to agree with my ass of a brother for once, guilty.

Aro: The sentence is passed. Felix, Demitri, take care of this upstart author.

Felix: *cracks his granite knuckles: gladly, master.

Demitri: indeed
Caliborn96 chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Can you say depressing?
Robin.D chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
wow that was good :o) :o)
Sumi-chan-desu chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
I love it! :)
Kenjo chapter 2 . 5/10/2011
OMG! OMG! OMG! I cried... Waaaahhhh...
aderrett chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
wow thats some heavy stuff you got there
Moon Sea Star chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is an amazing story! :)
LadyVivianeNight chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Fantastic. Enthralling. Enchanting. Your style is impeccable. I thank you for sharing this with us.

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roon0 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
How very sad but beautifully done.
Missing from heaven chapter 2 . 6/13/2010
that was WOW just WOW ... in the end I was crying :(
Twilight's Sapphire chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Sad, tragic, but so beautifully written.

Thanks and take care
soulspirit18 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
I loved this. The story was so sad that I actually cried. :)
vampirelover2009 chapter 2 . 5/31/2010
no their hair dosn't grow.

what i always wanted to know was why bella never had a period!
vampirelover2009 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
That was beautiful! please write more stories!