This was truly a wonderful story,yea it had very bad guys in it,but all in all a very nice story.

JeanneZ84

I loved the toast and this story. :) I just love your stories!

Oh, cute ending. This was an intense one... I'm sad to see it end, but glad everything turned out okay. :) Good work!

Please update soon.

JeanneZ84

I can not believe how aweful and cruel these guys are.

JeanneZ84

Oh!NO!not these monsters back for is just horrible.

JeanneZ84

Ohhh! The hug was so sweet! That was a great chapter. Worth the wait! :) Poor Neal though, they've put him through so much. I hope he recovers. And Peter, too. Yay, he'll get back to Elizabeth!

I am glad you let Neal rescue Peter, despite his fragile condition. Doing that will comfort Neal and relieve his guilt.

out of all ur storie i have read someone either gets kidnapped beaten or has dreams of demon bunnies; so do u not like the characters or what?

The Burke's will do everything to protect Neal that is for sure.

I can hardly wait to read the rest of this story.

JeanneZ84

Now is alright is safe again.

JeanneZ84

This is sad Neal thinks Peter is stayed there to protect Peter and now he is till he finds out the truth or maybe its really wait and see.

JeanneZ84

This is all so hard on Neal,the torcher everything,but especially being away from his friends and family.

JeanneZ84

Another great chapter. You are relentless about keeping Peter or Neal or both in danger.

I liked Jones in action in the previous chapter.

Ahh! Hurry Neal! *panicky* I don't want Peter to get hurt... Yay for Hughes, who's helping now! Good chapter. I liked it a lot even though I hate the bad guys.