No entendí nada a lo ultimo :v
Estoy muy confundida xD
Pero me gusto la historia un poco :3

WWWHHHHHAAATTT? WHATS WITH THE ENDING, MY IMAGINATION CANT FILL IN THE BLANKS.

Please no NzM

Honestly i dont understand
She doesnt really need to use the 'forbidden technique'
Sounds useless to me
Some of the things are a bit unrealistic or in this case useless
you need to work on that

Sorry but this story was kinda hard to read due to the fact you didn't make it in proper paragraphs. ...but great story

Ooooohhhhh.. Nice names...

I know this is late, but this was an exceptional and talented piece of work! :') Beautiful and even if you are no longer active here, don't stop writing and good luck!

Ugh that was so bitin! I love the story and I am, in fact, fan girling over it. Good job! (P.s you know me)

Great story :)

Wait, hold on a sec. I'm even more confused then ever.
From the beginning of chapter one till the last chapter, it was really very rushes. You need to explain it more with details.

Bold hurts the eye. You don't have to 'bold' stuff which was not necessary. And Mikan was a Mary-sue. I mean, what's up with the 'strongest person in the school' and all sorts of clichés? And you have dramatically, described Mikan in a way people might think she was some sort of Maniac.

But honestly, I like the way you're writing. That's what kept me going in the story. I hope you can improve as nobody is flawless. :)

I don't usually review these types of stories but something about this fanfic made me want to. This one of those fanfics that leaves you fluffy inside whenever you stop reading but there is also these factor that it you should also take it seriously

Ara? I can't remember what S.E.C. means.. O3O

But I'm glad your story is still the same style (phew).

It's such a nice change cuz it's so short and nice.

Hahaha, but I'm just repeating all the words I said last time (so long ago?).

Keep it up! Even though this is one of your older chapters. xD

I please enterupt? I apparently was the who thought of/wrote the seems that my friend here wasntn listening -.-#. The ending can have different it was that Kairi wasnt really there all just an ellusion brought by can also mean that Kairi has left his past and began a new ,It might have not even been kairi at all (*cough*kiara Afghanistan *cough*).So yeah thats it

;))

Wait, so...there was no black feather tattoo? The ending kinda confused me.

It was a great ending, but I kinda think you should have added something like, "the back of his neck showed that there was no black feather..." or something like that. If you meant there was no tattoo on the back of his neck, of course. 'Cause it took me a second to realize that you meant that she had seen no black feather ON THE BACK OF HIS NECK.

Other than that - it was great! I loved it.

I saw this story a few times before, actually, but I passed over it 'cause the summary didn't look all that appealing to me (no offense). I'm glad I read it now, though!

Love it!