Yess this is beautiful despite my reservations

Holy fuck I kept imagining Matthew as Levi (AOT/SNK) and Alfred as Eren and the rest as the other team and it's absolutely wonderful

incest

this is cute but only one problem

You called Seychelles a slut and a hoe.

WHY DOES /EVERYONE/ KEEP SAYING THAT

SHE IS A SWEETIE INSIDE AND OUT AND HAS DONE NOTHING WRONG

STOP HATING ON HER SHE IS PERFECTLY FINE AND WONDERFUL

otherwise it's fine, some punctuation errors and stuff but pretty good!

Yes, hockey is kinda sexy. Actually, it's very sexy. And I liked this story more than I thought I would.

Very sweet, and a nice transition between each time frame. I liked it :3

The hockey team are now my favorite people ever.

I like this, it's different and i F****ng love Captain!Matthew. Nothing gets inbetween canada and hockey- a sterotype i dont help disprove.

If i would say anything about improvements it'd be a little more development in the relationship (Alfred and team)or the team interacting. But as a one-shot it's awsome, it would make an amazing multi-chapter though.

Good job anyway :)

I've read this SO MANY times and I don't know why I've never left a review. Good thing I felt like procrastinating on schoolwork today :D

Seriously, I love this. To the point that I actually have a copy saved on my Kindle. Not kidding. To me, this was /amazing/. Everyone's characters! The protective hockey team! And Al, freakin' adorable absolutely amazing Al! I could go on and on but this is definitely one of my favorite USCan fics. It was hilarious to read and made me laugh multiple times :D

Haha your a/n made me snort and yes toewes is hot but he like never ever blinks cuz he's too serious for that. I loved this story and the protective!team made me smile on the inside and I like the whole story. I don't know how to describe it but it was just awesome. A win, not a fail don't worry ;)*creepy Ivan wink

ew blackhawks, totally hate them (except for the Candian players), no offense, but what can i say? im a canuck fan

Haha, I like how everybody had a "ginormous man-crush" on Matthew. And I totally like how you made him completely badass! D

I couldn't help but notice you didn't clarify if Kumajirou was stuffed or not. For some reason I'm inclined to think that Alfred somehow managed to stuff a real, live polar bear in Mattie's locker - because it would be SO like him.

There are so many amazing things about this it isn't even funny. You managed to include a bunch of characters, some whose personalities haven't been fully discovered yet, and give them some sort of "breath-of-life" that makes them interact with each other perfectly.

Absolutely amazing~

Nice one-shot! I like these hockey fics and KickAss!Canada.

:D

Thanks for writing!

Aww, it's really cute! Love the overprotective hockey team. Al is so…Al. He's like a puppy, and you portrayed that perfectly. Awesome job.