Story as a whole…the gore in the first section feels unnecessary IMO. I can understand for a “gritty” take, and SatAM is arguably the “darkest” STH setting there is, but regardless, it still felt excessive. That said, like the concept and its execution. Yeah, ending is cheesy, but it works well structurally, and ties in the three settings well.

Wow.

You had me on the edge for the whole thing. And I was totally freaking out by the end.

:D

This is an amazing story.

You should get an award for your awesome writing skills.

:)

Great work.

~Denvana~

Aww this was so touching. I loved this so much! The love there, I actually nearly cried when Metal 'died' in Sonic OVA, it was so sad!

Loved this! Really awesome and sad.

Very nice story. I liked house you combined the ending as you did. :) I enjoyed this.

I do like your work, and I expect more from you!

I loved it, and the way that the different situations and timeframes bled into each other was flawless. I was amazed you pulled it off so nicely because that's one of the hardest things to do with a fic that I've seen so far. Seamless and amazing as always. :D

-Nixe (Takhrenixe)

Very heartwarming. ;-) Good job!