Reviews for Mocking
wendy1969 chapter 19 . 9/14/2011
thank god,

finally they are a family. Although i would have been happier if someone had shot Alice, never could stand the overenergetic shopaholic makeover freak. LOL. :D
wendy1969 chapter 14 . 9/14/2011
oh my lord... heartless hasactually found a heart. it is about time she did.

what woman in their right mind would do what she did and never look back
wendy1969 chapter 12 . 9/14/2011
heartless little so and so, is what she is
wendy1969 chapter 9 . 9/14/2011
God, can someone let rose slap her one please. the babe wont feel it. her womb is further down than her face
wendy1969 chapter 8 . 9/14/2011
I do wonder what exactly is going to happen once it is born.

I am glad the chief is good and respects jaspers decision
wendy1969 chapter 7 . 9/14/2011
shit, so sorry about forgetting to review.

I dont have anything nice to say about bella so i am saying nothing but the fact that at least jasper has the head on his shoulders.
linntherese chapter 20 . 5/7/2011
I had zero respect for this Bella in the beginning. I mean, she wouldn't even talk to Jasper, can you be more selfish? Only thinking about herself and her needs. She could have been more "grown up" about it. I was happy when Yale wasn't what she thought it would be, she deserved that I think. When she came back to Forks and started spending time with her daughter I was a bit disappointed that Jasper made it that easy for her.

Though I was disappointed with the characters sometimes, I really liked the story.
wendy1969 chapter 20 . 11/10/2010
great stuff
emnjasluver88 chapter 7 . 10/20/2010
Bella is a stupid selfish fuckin bitch, how could you not love your baby. Women like that are a disgrace...
heartbond chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Okay I read your'e whole story before I reviewed and I loved every moment of it, your a great writer and I hope that you continue to make stories
BriyerRose chapter 20 . 7/20/2010
I am glad that they all got their HEA in the end!
BriyerRose chapter 14 . 7/20/2010
I am glad that she is finally growing up!
BriyerRose chapter 13 . 7/20/2010
See she was a selfish brat and now she is regretting her choices!
BriyerRose chapter 9 . 7/20/2010
I do not like your version of Bella!
BriyerRose chapter 5 . 7/20/2010
Bella is acting like a selfish spoiled brat! Believe me I am all pro choice but she should really talk to Jasper!
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