Such s good one-shot. i loved it
ehehe so cute333

"It helped that she imagined she was aiming for his face."

The beginning makes me feel a combination of amusement and shared righteous anger.

"It will find you. How is that so? It is because searching for something does not always make it become reality."

I think he was referring to himself, Tenten! Yummy!

Oh, I like Shino's take on when kissing should happen.

Aw, I really like stories in which the girls are all friends.

Admittedly, I've never been a big Neji fan, but there's something delicious about having him all agog over the "new" Tenten and her ignoring him.

The teasing of Kiba by the girls is funny and cute and appropriate all at the same time.

I had never considered the ripe potential for Neji to be a narcissistic bar crawler.

A slightly unfortunate way to have a first kiss, but at the same time, so long as they both enjoyed it, showing up Neji was worth it.

EW! So not romantic! LOL

Yay for her straightening everything out in the end!

That was so yunmy! Thank you for tasty fic!

Yeah!Date!Date! Oh, the rumors Kiba would spread if he found out Shino spent the night...

Best line ever.

"It Happens"

Lol swear I could see Shino's blase expression. Awesome work love seeing tribute to secondary characters

Awww! Very cute story and very well written too.

I like this pairing very much, I kinda give NejiTen a fair chance but I like this more and plan on reading your longer stories next, keep up the good work.

nice pacing and story progression. cheers

bwhaha this one was fantastic! I may be an Shino/Tenten fan now D

aw! you have me liking shino/tenten more and more. i will even say that i do enjoy an occasional neji bashing from time to time, if it's done tastefully...yours was. i know it's hard not to bash him...his character can be quite the prick. til next time!

This is a really good story you should add more chapters. You are very good at writing Shino/Tenten stories, inconceivable dreams is also an amazing story

That was nice. I hadn't expected to see another ShinoTen fic from you, but here it is. And very good it is.

I think I'mma look for some more ShinoTen on FF. I'm kinda interested in the pairing now.

And, for the sake of this fic, Neji is an ass. Though otherwise, he is agreeable.

M-R

Well, this is the first fanfic I've read in which Shino is romantically involved with someone, but I think it's great, since he is a good character and needs some more love :P

i hope in the end will be nejiten.

:) Still good the second time around.

I loved it then and I still leve it now!Awesome!Love the Kiba Ino banter also!