Another great story from a great author!

Congrats!

Beautiful, sad, and well written. Your descriptions are really amazing, and the characters are perfectly portrayed.

What more can I say? Only that you keep writing great one-shots :)

This is such a depressing scene (I think) and you captured it so well! I could almost feel myself start tearing up!

Poor Ven and Aqua! T_T

Another super job! ;D

Beautiful and sweet. It really captures the essence of things. Your usual dramatic flair and detailed descriptions are, as usual, perfect for this kind of scene. Nice!

sniffs so sad but so good cant wait for the game in english 0

You can't imagine my delight when i get online and find not one, but TWO lovely oneshots in my inbox.

I read Fight the Shadows before this, and now i can't decide which one's the best out of all of these. D: you put so much emotion and detail into the piece that it's just... awesome. you get more insight into the scene reading these oneshots than by watching the cutscene XD

Keep 'em coming, Wolfe!

-UnVeRsEd

You mentioned that Aqua was scolded for picking up Eraqus's keyblade. Are you going to write about that?

Wha's with this epic-FF-mania? You're driving me into furhter insanity of the epicness of your depiction of each and every one of the scenes! XD So GOOD! K-U-D-O-S!

Aww! This was so cute and angsty! :D I love it! You did a wonderful job, Divine!

-RV

LOVED IT~!

Wow, you sure are fast! I hadn't expected to read this today. Aaww, it really is heartbreaking. It almost makes me cry, Aqua being the big sister and all. And the part where Ven smiled a little... It's all so sad!

And the way you write this down, it's almost as if it's happening in front of my own eyes. I loved it!

You sure have potential! Definitely a favorite.