ii s perfectly alright to make yao a girl! me and my friend were stuck on china and chibitalia's gender for a while in the beginning . . .

I was like 'durrrrrr Rochu' which I don't mind but it has issues with my Russiamerica self. Like my russiamerica fan says 'Russia isn't a communist country and I thought they had more issues than America and what about sexual tension cold war and bloody hell isn't Yao scared of Russia?'

and my normal hetalia fan is like 'Rochu is still cute and accept this! If that's the case you should hate UK/US too because it's almost incest and Canada x America because it IS INCEST.'

So yeah...I still like this chapter and I am kinda gettting it. The Italics is the history of the country and the normal is the human versions with quirks. Like Russia is getting married to girl Yao (who is canon lmao..) and Alfred is probably a bomber/pilot living with his twin Matthew and his father (mother? Francis? lmao..) Artie. I HOPE I guessed this right -.-;

keep up the good work btw.

HJGFJHUYFYUBUGIUGYKHY!

RoChu! *panics*

But it's better to see Yao as a girl :B

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No prob :B

Although 'darling' is 'милая' c:

RusAme's coming, yup? Can't wait )

- Helen

I will admit I'm a bit confused as to what's going on at this point, but I bet it'll be cleared up eventually. Still flawless and beautiful writing though :)

And I know what you mean about IvanxYao...eww

*sobs* wahhhhh! POLAND!

ahhh this is really good...dark but good.

The summary looks very interesting too. I can't wait to see more! (russiaxamerica! yes! yes! yes!)

I don't find it very confusing yet. I could tell that they were countries in this (well, you did put a C at the top but still).

I am very excited to see where this goes. It's a really interesting idea. Really well written and dark. In a good way! And im a sucker for anything russiaxamerica. Haha

Update when you can :)

damn i was swearing up a storm reading this I was all, "you bastards!" But it was really well written poor poland though God. D8 keep it up!

;A; *speechless* That was really good. Um, *trying not to say anything that would make her seem as psychotic as Russia* I liked the torture? *said it anyway* But, truly, this looks like a great story so far! PLEASE CONTINUE IT.

whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa...*waves hands*

POLAND DIED?

whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa...Germany's a bastard for a change?

Wow...this fic starts off with a bang. I'm like 'omg is Alfred going to die after confessing something to Ivan blah blah blah angsty fic.' and this happens.

I seen Feli die, Ant, Lov, and Belarus, Toris too, with a dash of common cold war Ivan and Alfred death but not Poland *adds that on the tack*

...how the fuck are you going to do this? Country AND human? *curious and delighted*