I loved this whole thing and the last little blurs with Cloud learning English has to be my favorite.

"Well cadet, I guess you could say he was acquainting himself with my shower curtain and floor tiles,"
Gods- Cloud is in for it now. Wonderful line,

I love it !

I LOVED this. It was funny, sweet, funny, exceptional, funny...did I mention funny? I serious XD I almost died of laughter while reading this. I was hoping to see Denzel as a teenager while in the Parenting 101 guide. I want to see Sephiroth's reaction when he walks in on his son while he's shamelessly making out with Kadaj it would have been delicious ;3 Denzel would top of course -hearts-

Hi,
I like his story, I do really! But it hasn't to do anything with the storyline of 'Of cadets and curtains'. If I'd be in your place ( but that's of course just a suggestion), I'd publish it as a story on it's own, instead of an additional chapter.

Even if it was someone I liked, if they're sneaking into my apartment they're creeps xD

Seph sure is accepting of Cloud xD

Omg I love your snippets / drabbles. And that reference to KH was a nice addition - I do love Riku and Sora. :) hehe

Whipped! xD

Seph would definitely give Cloud the world if he asked. :)

I loved this oh so much. And I'm so happy they adopted Denzel.

What can I tell you? I simply love this story, as well as your sense of humour!

The relationship between Cloud and Sephiroth is depicted in a wonderful light-hearted way, although (as you wrote in chapter 9) there are hints of more serious moments in their life. I think it's a good thing that you didn't describe this dark moments too extensively in the actual story, it would have taken away too much of the humour and the lightness of the story. It's enough to know that Cloud always manages to get Sephiroth out of Jenova's clutches.

If I could make a wish, I'd like to read another chapter with Cloud's mother, interacting with her dearly beloved son-in-law :-))...eg. how she reacted when she learned that she has a grandson - that would be awesome!

I love it.

Awww...this was so sweet...and hilarious. Good job!

...I have literally read all of these chapters in the span of a few hours and I have to say that I loved every bit of it! It was wonderful and hilarious! So cute and fluffy. I loved seeing Sephy-pants be the insecure one for a change and the way Cloud has him wrapped around his finger sometimes just made me grin the entire time I was reading it.

This was just wonderful and I can't wait to see more work from you. 8D

Sincerely,

YOUR LORD AND MASTER!

~DB

reno's eyes are blue with a touch of green. love the story!

REeno's eyes are pale green.

This was reallt cute! I thought the whole thing was hilarious