2019... read this for the first time... and i thought it was written beautifully. I thought your writing on each character was spot on.. and how they progressed throughout the story was on point. Good read.. thank you.

This sucks all because of one lie. Glad the truth came out in Glee cuz how could Quinn and Puck keep such a secret for all these years.

I have to agree with other reviewers. Finn should know that Mac is not his biological daughter. Let him decide how to proceed. Not fair every one knows except Finn.

THIS IS AMAZING!

I can't believe I read this whole thing hoping for a better outcome. Your other stories clearly states which ship you are writing about... Not this one. I feel duped.

You captured everyone's voices and personalities perfectly. The only thing I didn't like, was that Finn never found out the truth about Mackenzie.

I loved reading this...

No no no it's all wrong no mé gusta

Such a good story. Perfectly told, funny, sweet, realistic, satisfying.

One of my favorite parts:
"He really wants to make that comment, but he's pretty sure it'd get him divorced, castrated or murdered, and none of those options are all that appealing."

The characters just grow so much, and that's really awesome.

Amazing! Just amazing! I absolutely love this story. It brings to tears every time especially near the beginning, but I'm a sucker for a happy ending and this is the ultimate one! So incredible! 3

I admire this story so much: a realistic narrative of how it could have gone and how, ultimately, all four of them could have all been happy with it. There is much to be said for first love and undeniable attraction, but real love comes in the life you build with someone, and I love that they all matured enough and lived enough and loved enough to eventually embrace that. And I am glad you went into so much detail; I think it was important for us to see all the ins and outs of their lives and relationships in order to truly believe that each of them ended up where they wanted to be. I also appreciate that they all stayed in each other's lives and became a family. The only change I would have made is for Finn to find out that Mac was Puck's daughter. I hate the idea that Finn may live his whole life not being aware of a key piece of information that his wife and closest friends know. It would have been a hell of an explosion, but I think that could have been overcome (with Finn and Puck acknowledging that fatherhood is ultimately about being there, not whose sperm went into the mix) and still achieved the same ending. Nonetheless, that's a minor detail, and this is a great story that I enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing.

ITS AMAZING

Wow! I absolutely LOVED this story! You did an amazing job writing this. There were so many times I didn't think either couple would make it. There were so many times I didn't think Rachel and Finn would get over each other and that neither would Quinn and Puck..but they did! And they made it as the couples they were supposed to be. I think Puck got over Quinn faster than Quinn got over him...I think she was the last one to let go out of all 4 of them. Am I right? The way that you kept Finn and Puck best friends and made Rachel and Quinn best friends? Freakin' amazing! And the fact that Rachel knew the whole time that Mackenzie is Puck's and never said anything and stayed with him anyway...I loved her explanation "I loved you". It was just so simple of an answer for her. When Rachel was pregnant...I laughed so much! It was hilarious. And as for Puck telling his 7 months pregnant wife that she was fucking nuts...I was like "that's a great thing to tell her!", but it so made me laugh! I could continue to go on about everything I loved about this story but, I think this review would end up being a few pages long. I love that everything worked out in the end! Amazing job!

L. period. :-) en verdad increible. Me encanto. A veces en la vida las cosas no resultan como queremos. Pero se encarga de ponernos en el lugar que debemos estar.. Buen trabajo. Just made my day

fucking perfect