hey i was wondering if i could use this idea for a fanfic i had in mind with your permission of course maybe you could send me a pm to hammer out the details if that would be okay with you

What a bizarre story. The initial conflict is already weird enough but the story flanderizes most of the characters to absurd levels. Most of the cast is holding the idiot ball just for the plot to progress the way you want to. It doesnt feel natural at all.

Eh. Someone whose whole character is just being an evil bitch doesn't need so much prominence. They're just aggravating to read about and having Ria this early in the story (and framing her as a primary antagonist, if I'm not mistaken) means the payoff of seeing her downfall is going to take too long to be worth it.

Best story ever! Been wasting my time here instead of doing my job!

Yes and when a human is around monsters the experience just doesn't matter, huh

"he wouldn't obey her"

Sums up their relationship exactly, as master and slave

ANYONE who thinks Tsukune and moka should get back together after all that is a supreme idiot. How could you even THINK that after what moka showed she would do if she didn't get her way

NONE OF THIS deserved what moka had done to herself and Tsukune. It just goes to show how far Moka was willing to save her pride. She STILL wants TSUKUNE to apologize for not bending to HER wishes

Akasha is a supreme idiot here

Not what I expected.
Still a good read.
Not gonna bother with AN or whatever the 55th is
(A "What if" or "Other perspective" thing? Eh, either way)
Learned from Deponia to let endings be such

As I said good read! Wish ya well.
Have a nice day.

I am very much confused by this epilogue but as always the emotions have been been written brilliantly; Aghea and Shade's part was probably my favourite

The thing bugging me most about this is the "Why" aimed mostly towards Mikogami, since the only possible thing that I can see foreshadowing this would be the blood tests

The whole story was well-written and engaging to see play out

... I am very much confused by what just happened and do not understand how Mikogami benefits from this

The emotions were as brilliantly written as ever and I liked Tsukune's line of calling Moka a bully

From the part about blood, I'm assuming that Tsukune might have somehow taken the Shinso majority from Moka

The backstory does make a lot of sense for explaining Moka's issues, though it most certainly doesn't absolve her actions.
Ria being Ria definitely makes sense for adding to the situation

that talk between Issa and Akasha was definitely the highlight of the chapter for me, though the rest was all pretty good

Well, this was interesting to see and I can see how it might affect her opinions of humans, I guess