Oh this is going to be good :3

okay this story is already getting interesting! I hope too find out what happens next soon!

keep it up great work

from grovyle the thief lover!

I hope you decide to continue this. It looks interesting, and is written much better than most fanfictions. :)

Oh, please, my friend! I want to see this story flow! PLEASE! It looks great!

So, it's been a loooooooooong time since you posted this, and I just wanted to let you know that I'm interested in it. Please continue? Please? :)

Seems very interesting. I could love if you continue it.

PLEASE! ANOTHER CHAPTER! STUCK IN SCOTLAND FOR THE WEEK ON A BOAT!( THIS IS MY ONLY ENTERTAINMENT!

Wow! This is really great so far! I love it!

Poor Facilier. He must have amnesia.

And Emile Facilier doesn't really roll of the tongue. Dr. James Facilier has a nice ring to it - not to mention lots of villians have James as their first name, like Prof. James Moriarity (Dunno how to spell it) from the Sherlock Holmes series, Captain James hook from peter pan, and my brother James Jarad! (OK, he's not a villian, but still, he's dead annoying!)

Update fast! I really like this!

OMG I WAS JUST LOOKING FOR A STORY LIKE THIS AND WHEN I SAW IT I WAS LIKE 'OH GOD YES!' LOL. I'm going to add this to my favorites because I really like it so far and you need to get the next chapter up, it's epic. XD

Wow. Mama Odie resurrecting Facilier? Didn't see that one coming. Excellent job. Please continue! :)

Hey, fellow villain-redeemer! I remember your review of my Gill fic, and it's great to see you take on my current fave.

A well-written beginning, detailed and quite easy to visualize, with realistic thoughts and dialogue. I hope to see Facilier as a frog...just what he needs to attain perfection. ;)

Hiihii, I'm sucker for villains too. Faci MADE PaTF- he needs more than that freaky tombstone to be revered by! Your idea here is good, and you flehsing out Odie who had no screentime forgood charscter developemnt. Keep up the work and update soon!

Good story. However, I am disapointed at you for not updating. How can you post this good of a first chapter and not add more? :)

;] this was interesting, I'd like to read more of this ;]

So Mama Odie and Facilier are RELATED? Holy cow, I did NOT see that coming! Awesome story, please write more soon!