I have not read many harry potter fanfics, but from the first ones i've read the ones with Luna/Snape pairings have always been the ones i've enjoyed and this one was also very sweet and while I think you kept well to character it might have been nice to have Snape be a little nicer to the end. But still your story is very nice.

I'm not trying to be mean, but offer constructive criticism. Starting with the good! It was well written and I didn't notice any grammatical errors. I love the dig at McDonald's and the characterization was well played. Onto the bad... I didn't like the way it ended. It was very abrupt and I felt like I should have cared more at the end.

loved the story:-))

That was very cute. Thank you!

This is so Luna. Lovely.

"Snape sniffed. "It smells like fat, sugar, and salt."

She nodded. "That's exactly what it is."

geniopus. great story please write more and never let the flame die. night.( falls asleep)

(requm) again? stop with the late night or i will kick you in the bloody head!

(Me) okay. later. good story

The centaurs are very wise, they knew that Severus needed optimistic, determined Luna to guide him out of the forest and back into life while wooing him with muggle food.

And I have such a craving for Chinese food right now. Pork buns, yum!

That was so cool. The thing about the Forest was awesome, and the centaurs looking after him. That's the kind of thing that they would do. And Luna rocks.

This was wonderfully written; it was very interesting to seet he way in which you used flowery language, because it sat so well with Luna's personality. The personification of each person was wonderful. It seemed to me to be a simple story that carried a lot of weight without one realizing so. Just wanted to congratulate you and tell you to keep it up. It was very nice and very, very enjoyable. Good job!

That story is a enjoyable one too…

Well-written and a very interesting pairing

This is very cute, too-I love how the centaurs rescued Snape when the humans couldn't be bothered (you have to wonder why Luna never checked out the Shack in canon, it would be like her to do so).

Love it. Good characterization.

Thanks for writing!