Loved this cute one-shot! I love your first person narrative when normally I prefer third person, but you really managed to show Axel's wit and sarcastic sense of humour and personality through this style. Makes the reader really empathise more with the heartache Roxas put him through lol. After a long break from reading fanfic I'm trying to get myself more interested in reading them again but most fics aren't holding my interest, but this is so humorous and sweet I had no problem reading through without feeling disinterested for a moment (also after fighting through an all-nighter... I'm struggling to write a review that makes the slightest bit of sense, aha).

Anyway thanks so much for the read! You're such a talented writer :D

I laughed so hard I cried reading through the part where Riku and Axel are tripping people up on the street! Hilarious XD This was a cute, coming of age story - loved it. Thanks for writing.

This is definitely one of my favorite oneshots, definitely one of the ones I come back to reread when the fanfic mood strikes me. Much love 3

That was honestly one of best potato stacking, table flipping, freaking fantastic oneshots I've read starting with the New Year. I'm obviously impressed by the confusing and conflicting relationship of the two. I feel as if there was a lot of heart wrenching, frustrating, and lovely interactions played out by them that it just...makes me want to anticipate for more. Damn Roxas for his confusing behavior, and damn Axel for just...tripping people on purpose when just strolling nonchalantly on the sidewalk. Goddamn, I think I'll just go fave this and read your other storis too. This one is pretty compelling to read. Overall, nice job. :)

Your stories are so much fun to read. I spend a lot of time smiling and often chuckle at the personality quirks and relationships you build between your characters. I really enjoy reading your work. Thank you!

Yesyesyesyes fuck

So this story may just be the best thing I have ever encountered on this site. It's well put together, well-structured and totally amazing. I loved it. I loved the pacing, the repitition and characterization. I loved the gag between Riku and Axel knocking people over on the sidewalk and how it tied into the end, actually being a trap set for any passerby. This felt like the kind of story I'd encounter in a literary magazine. There is no possible way to overuse the word love to describe how I feel about this story and your writing style.

HI! i liked this :) it was super cute and very well written. it was pretty well developed for a one shot too! good job :) thanks for sharing!

That as awesome! you have such an amazing writing style, it flows beautifully and the twist and turns in the story felt like they were jerking at my heart i seriously felt axels pain man. great job protraying the characters too. if i could rate this it would be 10/10! so yea keep up the good work dude!

I do find it amusing you make both of them such little shits! I couldn't stop laughing when Axel and Riku were tripping everyone on wheels lol. Nice story.

After having read Axel's Fables, I can tell this has not been looked over by your beta, but for once in my grammar-nazi life, I simply don't give a fuck. The angsting and the sex and the fluff... Wonderful. C: And normally, I hate when lines are repeated so many times in a story, but the fact that you changed up the explanations each time made it worth it. As I told you in my review for AF, you have a natural ability and talent for writing. And you also have a penchant for making me stay up till ungodly hours of the morning. But that's okay, because really, I wouldn't have it any other way. I love how it's so easy to get sucked into whatever story I'm reading that time stops mattering to me. You make it so easy to do that. And many authors on here simply DON'T. So yes, I'm officially babbling now and I really should just shut the fuck up and sleep. So I think I will. Have a pleasant night, I'm looking forward to reading some of your other stories!

this was just love...so beautiful and flawless~ I enjoyed reading this~ ; w ;

well done!

I'm severely tempted to gather up all your side remarks about love, about what love is and what it isn't, and compile them somewhere. They're brilliant. Every last one. And so true that it burns a hole somewhere holes shouldn't be.

-Reader

Ahhhh, this was really good. *_* I loved it; the perfect amount of angst and humour. Really great job~!

this is so fucking awesome:B

great job! :D