Can't do it. The start was weird and a little ooc. It kinda went too fast and its not really for me. Good luck.

Please update

I've got to see where this goes. Please continue.

Epic story man. Love how you tied Lucy in the DBZ world, building the family bond between Gohan and he. Please continue this man.

please update.

can't wait for the next chapter

pls mae a another one this story is getting really really really really good also make to where vegta assends to super saiyan 3 and gohan and lucy doing the same

im immensely disappointed

OMG I LOVE THIS! :3

How is Lucy able to give android 18 trouble when her power level is only 1 million? Frieza's full power level was 120 million and SSJ1 Goku's from back then was 150 million. Android 18 STOMPED SSJ1 Vegeta when he was stronger than Goku. Also, 1 million is MUCH too high of a power level for Lucy. It only takes a pl of 150 to blow up the moon, so your saying this Lucy can blow up thousands of planets easily? That doesn't make sense. I also recall you saying earlier that she was stronger than Gohan and Goten. Gohan is pushing at least 1 billion in base One last thing. You made the characters act very... strange. Gohan especially. He would NEVER act mean to someone he just met, and neither would Goku.

Glad to see the story is still alive.

do more plz

i like it but dont you think you rushed it alittle

This is fucking stupid lucy is a diclonius not a saiyan. I've seen both elfen lied and dbz and only a saiyan can go super saiyan. I'll admit I do like the idea of an elfen lied and dbz crossover

I like how piccolo is the main one who can even hold his own against lucy. Hes one of my favorite characters. I hope you have some surprise in store on that note.