i've been hooked since the beginning

i hope you do more great writing

just found this fic and plan on reading the whole thing through out the day and cant wait to read the rest and all the sequels.

but felt I had to make this one funny comment- Aaron lives at a vets, Lube is one of the most important parts of a a med kit of large animals. so if he was really desperate there would have been loads of bottles in the clinic ! not sure what paddy would think if he knicked some though

i have decided to reply before reading your next chapter. I really do not think Aaron would go with Wayne. He is a 1/2 Dingle and an in love teenager. He has shown his loyalty at various times in the past. { hope he stands strong. If he gives in he becomes the stereotypical weak gay male which I believe isn't him.

Just a thought

Ahh! Its good and getting better. At the end of the day the whole world wants their own version of what these two have.

Wow, you have done it again. This is superb writing. It made me laugh yet there is a pathos to it too.

Aaron is so in need of love yet has never really experienced it, ( apart from Paddy in a parental role). His whole life has been at arms length if he was lucky. He has learned to trust no one and nothing. You have managed to bring this out, Well done.

Jackson too is a character still in development. We know very little about him; not really even how old he is. Yet you cannot but like him and hope that this relationship will bloom.

I look forward to reading the next part. Thank you for your hard work.

that was an amazing end to an amazing story! please continue this, it was so good! so well done, and i agree with the others, i think a post-prison sequel would be really good! :)

Great chapter! really eventful! thanks

great story so far.. can't wait for the next chapter...

Loving the latest chapter, but it can't end there :P

I would love for the sequel to be set after Aaron's released.

and how prison may have changed him and his and J's relationship.

D

Brilliant, keep up the good work!

x.

Hey

i just got an account just to review your story. Please continue and don't let Aaron go to jail. I love the way you write. The story is just sweet, funny und very in character. But i realy hate bully-boy Wayne, even although I understand why he wants to have sex with Aaron (who wouldn't?) And well some of the chapters are not only sweet...*getting red*.

So go on writing...NOW!

(sorry for my poor english)

Greetings from germany!

Noni

A sequel please! I have to see how they all deal with Aaron's arrest and imprisonment! Please!

Have just read the story, poor Aaron! Wayne deserved everything he got. I hope yoiu do a sequal and Aaron tells Jackson the truth. Would love to see Wayne get his comeuppance!

You have to continue this! Although I hated the fact that Aaron had to go to prison there was no other way to end it. You handled the characters brilliantly, I would love to see what happens to them in the future!

Aw!

I thought for a minute that Aaron was going to do it and I was all like "No! Aaron don't do it!", and then he pulled back and I was like "Yeah! stuff Wayne he's not worth it! Jackson all the way man." And I was all happy again, but then all sad when he went over crying to Jackson but was happy again when Jackson just comforted him... I'm a little hyper eeek :p

:O Next one might be the last one! You can't do that to me! I need to read this fic, it's so cool and fantastic, and amazing and heart felt and you get the jist of things :p

Great story .. love the way the characters are acting how they really would ... but NOOOOOOO to Wayne .. eww