Four words? I love you is three words, so what does he mean?

what four words? I can't think of any four words!

This kind of ended rather abruptly, but I loved it nonetheless. Nice job

Tore my heart reading this, so cruel.

poor izayaa... don't cryy

Great work! I enjoyed the story :D

The ending feels really abrupt and rather unfulfilling. But overall, I enjoyed this fic. It was short and to the point. The thing I liked most was the characters' emotions.

aw this fic is adorable & very good for a first fic! izaya & his personality is sometimes hard to write especially when first starting. i do think he's in character he's just like a sweeter version almost lol. i think it might've been a little better or at least more IC if in the beginning you somehow conveyed him always liking shizuo but just now randomly finally deciding to tell him. maybe thinking he doesn't want to use manipulation this time & he has to tell him straight up or he won't take him seriously & believe him or something.. since it could justify the fluffiness & him going about this so directly just a bit more? just a suggestion. also loved the random izaya x masaomi! i think it would've been better as a separate one shot (bc i like when they end happily instead lol) but was really well done for a first lemon! it flowed pretty nicely, descriptive & decent length for a side pairing. i wouldn't've have minded if it was longer but it wasn't too short either. i hate when people write lemons & they only last for one sentence of actual sex lol

um just wanted to clear up this typo:
"Really, being with the flea c love's scent deeply would be so taxing on his mentality at times.
...
Izaya buried his face into Shizuo's clothed back, inhaling hishile ignoring..."

is really supposed to be:
"Really, being with the flea could be so taxing on his mentality at times.
...
Izaya buried his face into Shizuo's clothed back, inhaling his love's scent deeply while ignoring..."

OMG OMG OMG!
MY DEAR, YOU ARE DAMN AWESOME

OMG IZAYA ;; you poor thing

aww, it's a nice fic! Love it thank you for writing

Aww, the end is sweet, I love you author! Now I can breathe again as well 33 I'm glad you're able to finish this, I do love this story a lot. I did cry back then;(

i must say that i loved this story till chapter 8 came and i kinda got pissed i hate when memories and shit get lost and it was just a joke? i was kinda confused and mad and kinda just scanned over the chapters after chapter 8 just to see what happens but later went back and completly read them. still love the story though and i know your a good writer. (no flame) _

i like it when writers write stuff like this, ya know? it makes my heart hurt and all that stuff, i just love that feeling!