gosh! Finally MARIK! Took him long enough! An entire chapter of denial! People should know by now that man or woman, gay or not no one is immune to Bakura's smexshiness! XD

If I get down on my knees and beg, could you please finish this?

If I get down on my knees and beg, could you please finish this?

GEE ZUS, THAT WAS GODLY. :D

I'll kill myself if this is a one shot. :) Pleaaaase continue.

You're amazing at writing.

I literally could not stop laughing at the "Is that the millenium rod in your pocket" part. THAT WAS PRICELESS. You're awesome.

I know exactly what you mean - I can't write ecchi for my life, but I really want to... lol. You're amazing, please continue! :)

Haha! I don't know if the reference was intentional, but the Youtube video (Yugi-Oh Abridged Series: "Bakura's True Feelings") came to mind.

Bakura: "Let us make sweet hatred together... Just you and me... Hating each other... ALL. NIGHT. LONG."

Ohmagawd, just watch it, just watch it! XD

I must say I love this story because we all wanted to see Bakura and Marik make sweet hatred together. You also did a good job doing Marik's point of view. I like how continously denies his homosexual tendancies and talks about how he never read gay erotica, but just heard a lot about it. Talk about blatant lies. Anyway, the whole story was very funny.

lol it's based of the LK abridged isn't it?

How adorable!

You captured their personalities so well, especially Marik's obliviousness about being gay. :)

Lol, you're not the only one who gets nervous whenever writing anything involving sex. :3

Oh-whee, I love this story! You have a knack for really catching the most irritating quirks of these two. Are you sure there won't be a follow-up for this...? T.T *tries to think of a good incentive for a second chapter and fails* Me love you long time? Pleases?

Hey Alyssa, it's Angelica and I liked your fic. LOL, really funny and the sex scene wasn't bad (it's probably because you read/RP so much porn. u). :D

Aw, the storys over? First off, the summary totally drew me in; it was hilarious! Second, the whole fic was hilarious & really good :) And i know what chu mean xP I get squimish writing the sex scenes too xD I usually just leave it at making-out ._.

And love the LK reference, but making the story totally your own ;D

Omg so good! Must...have...sequal! Or another chapter! XD great fic!

This story is soooooo awesome! I can't really put it into words about how much I liked it! You should really continue this story!

I like it! You did a good job :D

Oh my gods, I died from the cuteness of this fanfic. Perfect, perfect, perfect. I loved it.

Actually, there are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but...I can't really notice grammar mistakes, because the adorable-ness of this fanfic actually killed me and I am dead of cute.

Write more Thiefshipping? Please?