Great work, you guys! I just wanted to know if you were going to ever put anything up about Sunny actually arriving on Earth. Sunstreaker and Sideswipe are my favourites, and I'd love to see some more focus on them, though this fic did a good job. Or should I say, 'Kinship' did.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to more updates from ALL your fics!

It was nice seeing this scene from a different point of view, I really liked it when I read it from Sam's.

At least not all military men are as close-minded as those from Sector 7 were at first...

Wanna read more!

Having reread this, I am struck by something.

Sunny and Sides have their pride, but they would sacrifice it for eachother. Before his brother made it to Earth, would Sides have worn a POW-MIA bumpersticker or window cling? It is an American tradition that I think that the twins and Hyde might agree on.

I'm enjoying the different POVs of the same events- because things look very different to each person. I'm reminded of some great movies like Rashomon, Hero, and more recently, Vantage Point. It must be hard to keep everything in sync, but I hope you can continue 'cause it's great.

(Laughs)

Loved this one! I liked how it was slightly different at points, from different perspectives. I also really enjoyed the sort of 'aggravated respect' they have for eachother now. :D

It's really enlightening to read that scene from Black's POV. And it seems even more emotional than Sam's, because we're now right there with the 'you'll see'.

There are always two, sometimes three sides to a story. Picturing Sidesiwpe as just a kid is hard to imagine. Especially since both he and Sunstreaker are very fierce, competent warriors.

Your series of stories is like staring at a (or The) cube. So many sides that make up one whole story.

Oh that was great! Loved the look into his mind. Will we get to see more or will we see thoughts and reasoning from others?

The good thing about convincing a skeptic, is that since he fought the idea so hard the first time, he's often back you all the way once he's convinced. Interesting idea.

Great story!

Liked this.

Great story. I love the idea of having another person's point-of-view about what is happening in the chapters of stories. Are you planning to do more of this? About Bumblebee's blog, I was wondering why it wasn't shut down after Sam discovered it threw his roommates, who could discover Bumblebee.

wow just wow this is a great story keep up the great work i can't wait to read the next one :D

Very, very nice. But you're probably a bit sick of me saying that. ;) Loved Black here. You really delved into him and made him three-dimensional. I have a feeling he and Sideswipe would get along.

Also, Sunstreaker as an artist? Have you been reading up on Dreamwave? ;) Okay, seriously. A great piece, par usual.

great insight into this surprisingly complex character