Reviews for Dance with Me |
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laelruin chapter 1 . 6/14/2019 Awe! So sweet! I loved it! (and wonder which dances they were talking about?) |
madmiko chapter 1 . 4/8/2019 How is it possible that I am still finding stories of yours that I hadn't read before? This one really caught me in its spell. I read it twice last night, staying up much, much later than I had planned, then again this morning. Then I absolutely HAD to find a video so I could see the dance. (What dance/song did you have in mind when you wrote this? I was thinking salsa.) After I found one that made me think of Lee and Kagome, I watched the next one which was Cornel and Rithika dancing bachata to Elastic Heart. I have been watching that video and re-reading the story all day today. (It seems like a follow-up dance to their first one to me and I can just hear the dialogue from the rookies as I watch it. _) I feel like you outdid yourself in your portrayals of the various characters. Love the idea that Lee thought Natuto might dance with him just to make the others wonder. The girls thought they were protecting Lee, but they ended up hurting him more by making him realize what they really thought about him. Bravo for Kagome showing them up and telling them off with class. You managed to make the "meeting while dancing at a club" story fresh and new, and Lee's talent and skill was completely believable. This whole story was magical. Thank you! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2018 That was sweet |
Kitsune Jack chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 I love this one too. |
Arella1 chapter 1 . 1/20/2016 That was so sweet! I loved your description of Kagome's team and that line about Naruto being mischievous enough to dance with Lee was hilarious! |
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 1 . 10/16/2015 Interesting crossover, and an interesting way to do it. |
jj chapter 1 . 1/19/2015 Amazing shame is a one shot |
Gelasia Kidd chapter 1 . 6/19/2014 Mean kunoichi D: Mean mean Rookie women D: Lee deserves love! |
SCREAMM chapter 1 . 5/2/2014 Oh i love this story! people always forget Lee but this short-story was amazing :) |
im ur misconception chapter 1 . 3/3/2014 Not A pairing i am used to, but it was cute and finally someone gives RockLee some love and attention he deserves. Cause like you stated he is Chakra-inept, but still just as powerful, strong and graceful than any of the other rookies. This is a really good story, the way you worded it allowed me to actually visualize it, and feel the beat and rhythms you described as well as the way they might of actually moved while dancing. |
Toreh chapter 1 . 1/11/2014 I know you made this years ago, but can we have a short sequel or epilogue? I'd love to see what their life was like afterwards. You did an excellent job writing this! |
Silversun XD chapter 1 . 11/10/2013 aaaawwwweeeee so cute! this is awesome! XD |
The Path of Supreme Conquest chapter 1 . 6/28/2013 This made me happy! There was Sesshomaru and youth and Kagome and youth! Less youth than I had expected, but I loved it all! |
wolfYLady-sama chapter 1 . 6/30/2012 So cute and detailed. You did an amazing job! |
FooFaFie chapter 1 . 2/21/2012 ohhhhh... how sweet, yes kagome is very... "youthful" (lolz) |