Gosh, this was amazing! I loved this! It was so cute, and I like how you even included Demyx in that little foursome ;) I can see how he fits in. This was HILARIOUS and it's definitely one of my favorite fanfics now. Keep up the good work! :D Even though this is like 3 years late...

Roxas...older than Axel! O_O Well THATS a twist! Cant wait to see where this goes!

ARGH, these are my favourite types of fanfics...but the not-so-recent update tells me it isn't really gonna be continued...is it? D: /3

"Well ... yeah, but really – doctor-patient, barista-coffee addict, they're pretty much the same right? So why'd you leave?" lol

D: You cant end it like that!

I simply laughed my ass off at seeing how Axel 'wrote' his name XD

is what roxas sings an actual song?

i love this story!

I must say, your dialogue is incredibly. The way your characters speak is absolutely flawless. It's smooth, natural, and hilarious. I'm only on chapter four but this is beautiful writing. Love it!

Aw, it's over already?~

But I was having so much fun reading how Roxas twirls Axel around his finger so easily!

Haha, a great story for any time. :)

I'm really happy that you updated. I like this story a lot and can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh I hope Axel doesn't screw this one up D8

great story, I ENJOYED reading it

Aw, did it end there? It makes sense in a way, with Roxas quitting and all that, but it's a teensy bit like finding out that you've eaten all of the candy in the bowl. Darnit.

Once more Roxas proves to be contradictory with his behaviour towards Axel, poor boy. I love the chapter Just wish you'd update faster :/ Oh well I want never got _ I look forward to the next update and have a Merry Christmas to!

I can't wait to see more of this great writing and story hope to see more greatness when you post again

RFG