Lovely, lovely! :D Wow, I love BenxShanks stuff, and this was really emotional and interesting... I like how we saw it from Yasopp's point of view.

such a sweet, but seriously good and well written story. :)

Characters In-Charakter... so nice.

Aww, this was so bittersweet. And Voyeur!Yasopp works surprisingly well.

your writing is so beautiful, a pleasure to read~

I really adore your sensual descriptions and the portrayal of the scenes

I could really feel the love radiating through my screen 3

Beautifully written, you have a way of explaining moments between them that just can't be said through dialogue _ and I think it's unique that you used Yassobb's point of view instead of Benn's or Shanks's, I love it!

pretty sweet. that incident had to affect Shanks more than he let on. this is a nice little snapshot of an offscreen moment.