Reviews for The Father of Your Child
TheElephantInYourRoom chapter 5 . 7/23/2015
The first time I changed my cousin, Conner, I swear he aimed. He got straight up my chest and stopped at my chin, thank the Lord.
tasheika.conley chapter 12 . 7/7/2015
That was a wonderful story. I'm glad that it all worked out in the end._
marthapreston4 chapter 6 . 1/3/2015
I love garcia/morgan but its like the kid is a prop in this story instead of an actual small person. And garcia is the one who adopted the kid and yet in the story she never picks him up,changes diapers, or feeds him derek does. It feels like if he never agreed then no one would take care of this kid
marthapreston4 chapter 4 . 1/3/2015
you know for adopting a miracle baby they didnt hold him a whole in that hotel normally a first time mom wouldnt let the kid go
marthapreston4 chapter 3 . 1/3/2015
They usually dont let single mother adopt babies especially one who works so much in a dangerous job.
marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 1/3/2015
The baby in a drawer comment made me giggle
marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
that was an adorable start
Guest chapter 12 . 7/28/2014
One of the best stories I have ever read. Makes it even better that it was Garcia and Morgan.
MichelleVHull chapter 10 . 3/6/2014
one little Problem with this story. you are legally not allowed to take a child out of the state where you are adopting them from until the adoption is final. so the baby would have to been already hers and the papers signed and sent to the proper places so she could leave the state with the kid. so all this about them taking away the baby for her to adopt is completely wrong. I know this because I am looking into adoption now.
d-kronk chapter 12 . 6/23/2013
Great fic! I'm glad that the adoption went through and love that they are getting married soon. I really like how happy they are together. I'd love to read more of this, either a continuation of a sequel...I'm not ready for it to end.
d-kronk chapter 11 . 6/23/2013
They are going through so much... I really hope they don't have many more obstacles in their way before they can adopt. I love Derek finally telling his mom. That was great.
d-kronk chapter 10 . 6/23/2013
Great chapter! I love Penelope showing Derek she's ready to move their relationship forward, and not being subtle about it. And I love that Derek proposed and him making sure she knows it's not just to solve their adoption problems, and that he marries her or no one.
d-kronk chapter 9 . 6/23/2013
I'm glad Matt is alright and I love Hotch overhearing Derek's end of the phone call. And the end of this... just so sad. The adoption process can be so hard. I love Penelope's solution of hacking in and changing the laws. :-) I'm glad Derek is there to think rationally and help calm her and support her. I really hope everything works out for them.
d-kronk chapter 8 . 6/23/2013
I'm really enjoying seeing them become a family. I'm glad everyone went to help pack Penelope's apartment. And Kevin showing up, that was great. I'm glad Derek punched him, cause after everything he said he really deserved that.
d-kronk chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
Great chapter! Finally, he tells her exactly what he means. And I'm glad she finally believes him. That was such an intense fight and I'm glad Derek didn't give up, that definitely shows that he's going to be there for her. I do like her one thing she chose to dictate. :-)
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