Reviews for like paper dolls and little notes |
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Hoshikoii chapter 18 . 6/7 This was so beautiful and emotional. I like how real the characters were and the dialogue was smart and mature. |
narutorocks13 chapter 18 . 5/5 This was so cute! I love how real all the characters are. I also love how well you captured true love, warms my heart! If you write other Naruto stories I’m definitely going to read them |
stronger13 chapter 18 . 4/21 Again, for the third time, reading and reviewing this. Still one of my most favorite NejiTen AUs! This is just so magical and could even be turned into a movie. The way you write it and the plot— makes my heart flutter. I can’t help the tears from falling. You are and your story is just simply amazing. You lighted hope in y broken NejiTen heart! Thank you. |
katsumi0003 chapter 3 . 4/5 Wait... What?! Kin is Neji's ex? As in the Kin that Tenten's ex cheated with? O.O |
DeltaBlairLines chapter 18 . 8/20/2019 I know it's been seven years so I have no idea if you'll see this but I've been in such a weird, romance-less funk for a while so I started to seek out some romance fics and let me just say...my inner romantic has come back to life |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/7/2019 Neji probably reads Tenten's romance books for more than mere *ideas* You have made me love Nejiten even more. It is with authors like you with your imagination and dedication and talent that keeps the Will of Fandom together. |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/7/2019 Wat... THE UFOS TOOK NEJI BECAUSE THEY WANTED TO KNOW HOW HE GOT SUCH LUCIOUS HAIR |
Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 18 . 2/21/2019 I was not expecting a whole lot when I started this. I figured it would be pretty great, considering how many reviews this has and the fact that this is a NejiTen story, so the amount of reviews is even more significant, but this was really great. Especially once the honeymoon phase was over, it really felt like you were very intentional with what you did and how you wrote the characters (like Kin - wasn’t expecting real substance with her, btw, great job, especially on her relationship with Zaku and their longtime connection. I like that) and the sequence of your events. They felt 3-dimensional and human and like humans that just wanted to love and be loved. Great job, you really deserve it. Now, to read the SasuSaku story in this same universe that you wrote |
potstickers4lyfe chapter 18 . 1/1/2019 I am so in love with this fic, I can't wait to read your other complimentary story (i think it was a sasusaku?) Thanks for sharing this with us, I really appreciate it! :D |
Guest chapter 18 . 11/28/2018 Wouldnt it be cute if Neji had a ring with a half moon on it? Aww. So cute! |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/28/2018 Wait, Did he Really propose? EEEEEEEEE! |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/27/2018 It's such an elegant story. Love the writing style. Only on Chapter 3 so far. Can't wait to read more |
xrudeawakening chapter 18 . 3/6/2018 This is such a charming story. |
xrudeawakening chapter 16 . 3/6/2018 This was amazingly beautiful. Senpai, teach me your ways! |
xrudeawakening chapter 15 . 3/6/2018 I'm so glad Kin and Tenten are cool now |